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June 7, 2010ok, so i am writing a story for littlekids
it is kind of liek a fairy tale and there are 3 kids in the forest and then the Big Bad Wolf chases them and chases them. and pretty much the whole book is the Big Bad Wolf chasing them but at the end of the story it is revealed that 3 kids ARE IN FACT THE BAD BAD WOLF and they were just chasing THEMSELVES. and it’s like whoa that just blew my mind
and that is called a surprise ending or a plot twist like in the movie SAW or THE SIXTH SENSE or FIGHT CLUB
do u think this sounds like a good story if u want to blow ur mind?
um it sounds alright but i agree with the first person..idk whether a kid would understand something like that.
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It’s alright but i dont know if a kid would understand it.
just make it really simple, that way the kid can just think something like silly wolf.
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um it sounds alright but i agree with the first person..idk whether a kid would understand something like that.
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Are you high?
I take it you haven’t seen "Adaptation".
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That has the potential to be a good book, but on the whole I would first suggest you start taking your grammar and spelling much more seriously.
With your question being an example of your writing capabilities, I would suggesting waiting a few years first.
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Doesn’t sound like a good children’s story to me.
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